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Monday, August 22, 2016

A Question for Viewers here


Do readers have any feedback to give on the half-published story Spellbound with a Kiss?  This story found at http://lctdadrms.blogspot.com/p/prelude-sleek-new-2007-black-raven.html has gotten a little over 1,200 views, but no comments.  I do not expect much reaction from viewers, but I have little time to devote creative energy toward writing.  I always have story ideas with a variety of characters, so I am trying to target my efforts.  Is this a story that readers would like to read the rest of?  Is it too long?  Boring?  Are the characters not interesting?  I am open to critique.  Many thanks!

3 comments:

  1. Hi I really enjoyed spellbound with a kiss, very good story with gr8 charachters, just wonders do u do stories fact or fiction bout the 1970's don't matter if not I still appreciate all of your posts,

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    1. Thanks a bunch for the comment Adrian! I have not attempted a story set specifically in a decade like the 1970s, mostly because the devil lies in the details. To get it correct takes much research, even writing in the present day. I write what I enjoy. I try to put my own fantasy into words.

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  2. wonderful blogs collection stories only with gbj

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